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Jungho
Jungho is the main protagonist (villain) of the supernatural horror web Manhwa, The Devil's Boy. He is a bullied 18-year old student who wishes revenge on his tormentors, as encountering the archdevil named Mephistopheles, who revealed that he had known him as the reincarnation of Faust (inspired or based) from the German folklore and also based on Ken Kaneki from Tokyo Ghoul, with similarities.

Why He Shouldn’t Make A Deal With The Devil

 * 1) To get the lamb of the room, he is just another stereotypical “bullied vengeful student” with no originality or anything else when he made a deal with a Devil named Mephistopheles who bestowed him magic powers to get vengeance on his tormentors.
 * 2) Instead of letting the bullies/delinquents live and have them punished for their actions, he just murders them which makes him a villain.
 * 3) His design is a poor man's rip-off of Ken Kaneki from Tokyo Ghoul with the hairstyle, the powers and red eyes while his hairstyle is similar as well.
 * 4) He doesn't care that his bullies change from being cruel people to being a coward due to being afraid of his powers.
 * 5) He never tells his teachers about his bullies and his cruel classmates, instead he just punishes them himself and hope they die.
 * 6) He is kind of rather bland and a weak character depending on the view of his personality and behavior.
 * 7) He is also in fact a rip off of Carrie from her self-titled novel, due to being bullied students and try to get vengeance by murder.
 * 8) He often uses his "friend", Lee Dongho to confess that their teacher is a harasser of other teachers, while plotting to manipulate his classmates to believe that their teacher has to die, how does Jungho know all about his whereabouts.
 * 9) He is taken too seriously to be a bullied victim who relies trying to injure himself (when he uses his magic knife to transfer pain to others) whenever all the bullies tormented him.
 * 10) Just like his bullies, he just cares more on proving himself that he is not weak and doesn't even grow when he should have not tried to murder his bullies.
 * 11) He often smiles evilly, making him much more of a "real" main antagonist instead of the main protagonist (which could have been Lee Shiyun and Wie Jinoh in the first place).
 * 12) He is in fact way too dark compared to similar “protagonist villain” characters.
 * 13) As we are supposed to feel sorry for him, Jungho just cares about beating up bullies who treated him poorly but he should have gotten proper fighting training if he doesn't make deals with Mephistopheles.
 * 14) He may have been smart to torture his bullies, but is not smart enough to fight back at Jae Galhwa, his primary bully.
 * 15) After Jae Galhwa and his gang had Lee Dongho beat up Jungho by tying him and pulling down his pants, he had his crush, Lee Yoonhee to commit suicide because of all the "bully" incidents he endured and he barely never stops her.
 * 16) Whenever he gets beaten by his tormentors, Jungho later goes out of his way to become a full-blown sociopath and a serial killer while manipulating Lee Dongho and the police by covering up his crimes.
 * 17) The manhwa tries to paint him as "sympathetic" protagonist, but suffers from poor execution as he is trying to be painted like a villain.
 * 18) He barely gets any personal training to fight back on his bullies at all if this story was changed (like the Devil (either Mephistopheles) would train him to become his “boy” or so).
 * 19) IDIOT MOVE: He tried to use his knife while he was cuffed by ropes from Jae Galhwa and his gang. However, Galhwa sees it and stabs him.
 * 20) He is often a crybaby that just wants to hurry to get vengeance on his bullies which proves that he never grows up.
 * 21) Depending on your view, he is kind of uninteresting and has no reason to exist along with the series itself also being as nonexistent.
 * 22) He barely even finds out why Jae Galhwa (who only tormented him due to being constantly abused and pressured very hard on his education by his strict father) and the bullies were tormenting him for when he went to Galhwa's home and killing the home's securities despite not encountering Galhwa's father.

Redeeming Qualities

 * 1) Despite being generic, his design is pretty good and does look like an innocent young boy.
 * 2) He at least can sometimes be likeable since he is good friends with Lee Yoonhee, Wie Jinoh, and Lee Shiyun.
 * 3) He is a well-educated student with good grades and a good artist despite being a bullied kid.
 * 4) As mentioned above, you should feel sorry about him and only cares about being better on fighting back.
 * 5) His Devil-like designs are pretty good despite being rip offs from other mangas.
 * 6) He does realized that Galhwa was actually his past life’s disciple who was a little boy who wanted revenge on Faust for murdering his father when he was making a deal with Mephistopheles eons ago.
 * 7) In the ending of the series, Jungho no longer has to be tormented by Jae Galhwa (who had reformed after he reunited with his mother who also abandoned him due to the abuse that her husband has do to his son) and was able to have a happy life with his formerly-abusive father.

Nijimi Anazawa


Nijimi "Nijimin" Anazawa is a recurring character of the psychological horror magical girl manga/anime, Magical Girl Site. She was introduced as a 14 year old pop singer of Dog Play.

Bad Qualities

 * 1) The main problem with her is that she is a short tempered little girl in private, while being a bright happy pop singer with sunshines and happiness.
 * 2) After Sarina revealed to her where Mikado's killer (Rina) is, she nearly killed her in her hospital room.
 * 3) She also goes to Aya's house to meet Aya's brother Kaname, whom Nijimi never realized that he is sadistic torturer using Aya as a stress relief.
 * 4) She never learns her anger whatsoever when Kaname kills her.
 * 5) *As a result, Nijimi should have helped Aya and the Magical girls defeat the King and the Site Administrators.
 * 6) She barely has much character development than "an angry little girl" is thrown out of the window when she dies.
 * 7) Her temper tantrum and being a happy pop singer does not make her a good anti-heroine at all and would have nearly murder so many people who angered her.
 * 8) She is rather poorly written and feels like she was written to justisfy that pop singers are mentally unstable and juvinile.
 * 9) Her "I want to kill her" line is predictable sometimes whenever she keeps thinking about Rina who killed Mikado.
 * 10) To some extent, she doesn't get any character development after her death, making it rather pointless.
 * 11) She seems to act like an anti-villain whenever she is angry at someone who wronged her.
 * 12) Like Aya, she barely tries to have the police arrest the loan sharks for torturing her father for money until the last 4 chapters.

Good Qualities

 * 1) Her voice acting and singing is good.
 * 2) When Aya went back in time to prevent girls from misfortune, Nijimi no longer has to endure her anger when his father was saved by the teleporting police officers arresting their family's loan sharks paying their debts.
 * 3) Having her father and her friend Mikado died, is quite reasonable why she had anger issues and you should feel sorry for her.

Brian Banner
Brian Banner is a villain from Marvel Comics while being associated with the Hulk. He is also eventually one of the main antagonists of the Hulk comics (with, One Below All, the Leader and Abomination). Brain was introduced as the abusive father of Bruce Banner/Hulk and being his arch-nemesis due to passing on the "monster" gene that he often never wanted to pass on. Since Brian tried to beat up his son in a funeral place where her wife was buried to prove that his mother was a fool and Bruce as a monster and a mutant (species from the X-Men comics), Bruce unintentionally kills him and his father's evil legacy would soon haunt his son when he becomes the green/gray-skinned monster that everyone knows.

Why He Is A Real Monster

 * 1) To get the cat out of the room, Brian Banner is an abusive father of Bruce Banner who would become the monstrous Hulk, and is shown to beat him up due to having a "monster" gene passed on to him whom Brian didn't want to have, making him an unsympathetic, yet unapologetic antagonist and a mean popular boy for that.
 * 2) He mostly exists to depict that abusive parents are reckless and cruel, but thats not the case.
 * 3) He is extremely sexist towards women including his wife, Rebecca, who deeply cares about Bruce and tried to get away from him when the latter kills her to prove that everyone are not foolish.
 * 4) Instead of mourning killing his wife, he just…tells her dead corpse to “stop being a fool” to herself.
 * 5) He treats Bruce like a weak puppy who doesn't deserve a good treatment and he barely apologizes for his actions whatsoever.
 * 6) He maybe an abuser and a sociopath, but his cruelty to Bruce and Rebecca makes him much evil to the overarching Hulk villain, One Below All as well as other well-known Marvel villains (Galactus, Apocalypse, Thanos, Leader, and Abomination), who are supposed to be twisted and evil.
 * 7) He pretends to be the victim like he tried to keep Bruce away from his crimes during a court trial of his wife's murder from him.
 * 8) He is no better when Brian is freed from a mental institution and continues to beat up Bruce for holding dirt from his mother's grave, in which Bruce unintentionally kills him in self-defense, leading his son to be haunted by him when he becomes the Hulk.
 * 9) His "monster" catchphrase is very repetitive whenever he insults Bruce because of inheriting the "monster" gene inside.
 * 10) He is poorly developed and barely has any much characterization as his "domestic abuser" personality is thrown out the window when he kills his wife.
 * 11) Aside abusing his wife and son, Brian barely cares about his sisters, Elaine and Susan, who also cared about Bruce as well, even tried to give a letter to Susan during an incident when Bruce was a teenager in high school, whom she doesn't want to read it.
 * 12) He is mostly one of the most hated Marvel characters.
 * 13) He often verbally abuses Bruce nonstop such as trying to destroy his christmas gifts, taunting him while being drunk from delusions and alcoholisms, and nothing else.
 * 14) * In the subject of the Ultimate Hulk novel, Brian was also abused by his own father, Bruce I, and had believed that he inherited a "monster" gene from him which led to become like him and wants to never have any children in fear.
 * 15) ** In the pages of Immortal Hulk, when Brian became a scientist, he started investigating gamma radiation and its anomalistic behavior as Brian was under the influence of a grotesque entity called the One Below All, who hails from the lower dimension of Hell called Below-Place.
 * 16) He is honestly no better in The Immortal Hulk comic series, where he continues to torment Bruce and his Hulk personas by possessing Sasquatch and taking him to the Below-Place believing that he was actually the One Below All’s “son”.
 * 17) In The Immortal She-Hulk issue, he met his now-grown up niece, Jennifer Walters from the Below-Place, who has been aware that her uncle murdered her aunt and "destroyed" his son from making his life a living hell, but just doesn’t care about that at all.
 * 18) Just like other Marvel villains, Brian has no redeeming qualities whatsoever and is just some generic "domestic abuser" stereotype who never grows up to be a better father.
 * 19) His goal of wanting to punishing his son for the monster gene makes no sense and proves that he is a delusional, but how on earth can he do that to his own son.

Redeeming Qualities

 * 1) His human design is well-made while his Devil Hulk design looks intimidating.
 * 2) He been defeated many times by Bruce/Hulk during Chaos War and Immortal Hulk.
 * 3) He is still dead before Bruce became the Hulk so that he will not harm him ever again.

Trivia

 * 1) When he helped the One Below All (to just probably wanted Bruce to suffer), Brian thinks that Bruce is the One Below All's "son" instead of him.